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csi_sanders1129 ([personal profile] csi_sanders1129) wrote2010-01-17 01:43 pm

ganked from [livejournal.com profile] dark_dreymer

The first FIVE (I'll take more than five, I'm feeling productive) people to comment in this post get to request that I write a drabblish thing of of any pairing/character of their choosing (within reason, people. Within reason :P). In return, they have to post this in their journal, regardless of their ability level. (If you absolutely can't write, I don't see why you wouldn't be able to offer drabbles, drawings or icons or something instead.)


1. [livejournal.com profile] clautophobia - Ben/Riley, National Treasure
2. [livejournal.com profile] whatyoulove - Tallahassee/Columbus, Zombieland
3. [livejournal.com profile] suerum - Jason/Spinelli, Michael, GH
4. [livejournal.com profile] kittycrackers Dante/Ethan, GH
5. [livejournal.com profile] dark_dreymer Tommy/Merton, BWoC
6. [livejournal.com profile] suerum Jason/Spinelli, GH
7. [livejournal.com profile] astronomylover Shawn/Lassiter, Psych
8. [livejournal.com profile] cynical_sweater Morgan/Reid, Rossi, Criminal Minds
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Jason/Spinelli - Jason choses Spin over Michael - Pt2

[identity profile] csi-sanders1129.livejournal.com 2010-01-18 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
Spinelli rolls up the bottom of his dark blue hoodie to reveal a stark white bandage on his side. “Kiefer and Young Michael might have been struggling over the knife when I attempted to intervene.” He reports. “It’s not that bad, really, it just required a couple of stitches at the behest of the medically inclined ones.”

“Which one of them was it, Spinelli?”

Silence is all the answer Jason needs. His anger channels itself toward the other occupant of his living room as a result. The one who doesn’t belong there.

Michael, looking all kinds of insulted and betrayed – both by his Uncle’s lack of faith in his story and by Spinelli’s tattling – scoffs again, folds his arms over his chest. “It was Kiefer!”

“I don’t believe you.” Jason responds cooly, still standing beside Spinelli.

“But, Jason, it was just…”

The elder shakes his head. “You could have killed someone, Michael. Spinelli or Kiefer. You would have been in jail and I wouldn’t be protecting you this time.” Especially if it had been Spinelli, but he doesn’t say that.

The teen glares in rebellion at the speech. “He’s fine! Kiefer’s fine, unfortunately, too! What’s the big deal?”

“Just leave, Michael. I’ll call Carly about this in the morning. Maybe the police, too.” He threatens, and ushers Spinelli upstairs before any more protests can come his way. He hears the door slam when Michael leaves as he helps Spinelli struggle out of his muddy, bloody and soaked hoodie.

Spinelli falters as he heads for the bathroom to clean up. “Was it wise to threaten police involvement?” He asks. “The Jackal assumed that you would want to avoid such things.” It was why he had involved himself in the first place. After all the drama with Claudia’s murder and Franco’s evidence, it seemed like the last thing they’d need.

“I’m not taking any chances,” Jason assures him, eyes drawn to the stark white bandage. “That’s not happening ever again.”

I really, really LIKED this!

[identity profile] suerum.livejournal.com 2010-01-18 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
Seriously, I am so angry with the way Jason is just all about Michael and there sits Spinelli quietly doing everything in his power to help him be all about Michael. I want to cry out on his behalf, "What about me, don't I count, don't I matter?" Then of course I want the answer to be an unqualified, unadorned, "Yes, you bet you do!"

That is what this story accomplished. Jason showed his primary concern for Spinelli. He trusted Spinelli NOT Michael to tell the truth. He was scared and worried for Spinelli. He realized that he wasn't willing to put up with Michael's antics if it meant putting Spinelli at risk in any way.

Michael is a self-entitled brat who may have some genuine emotional issues but it isn't always up to Jason to rescue him or fix things. I certainly don't want him valuing him above Spinelli. I know I'll probably never see something like this on the show so I am even more thankful for your story. You made me very happy!

satisfying

[identity profile] kittycrackers.livejournal.com 2010-01-18 10:13 am (UTC)(link)
I really like how this turned out at the end, how Jason chose Spinelli over Michael who just consistently twists and turns the truth to suit his own ends. Spinelli, as usual, is always thinking of the best interest of others. I really enjoyed reading this.