ext_144493 ([identity profile] flatliner345.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] csi_sanders1129 2011-11-16 06:12 am (UTC)

First!!

This was the perfect ending to the story! I thought that your characterizations were spot on in this piece. I absolutely adored how possessive and protective Eddie was of Nick. Oh, and poor Nick, getting kidnapped and whumped twice in two days. The ending was so sweet, it nearly gave me caveties. :)

All in all a great fic for this new fandom. Now, ahem...*TURNS PLEADING PUPPY EYES ON YOU*...sequel?

PS. This is probably just my nitpicking, and correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't "Rache" German for "Revenge"? Where you using the verb version as in "to get revenge"? Just curious.

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