http://trikcster.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] trikcster.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] csi_sanders1129 2008-08-05 11:52 am (UTC)

Ignoring the stab of jealousy that hit him at missing his chance to be Jimmy’s first kiss, he threw a twenty on the table, grabbed Jimmy’s arm, and pulled him out of the building. There were plenty of other firsts he could be.

That was probably my favourite part of the whole fic. :) Not to mention the fact when Brooke walked in on them. It came so out of nowhere I couldn't stop laughing. I can see this whole thing happening. Great job!

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