http://managerie.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] managerie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] csi_sanders1129 2012-12-21 11:46 am (UTC)


QUOTE: (John has to try, he's got Harold trapped in the car with him, after all, not like he can run away),
ha! Sneaky Reese!

QUOTE: Only about five miles.
*blinks* Short? *mental note: Do not go hiking*


QUOTE: he'll let his cameras figure that out later.
Cause it couldn’t just be that Reese has similar taste in food? Very Finch. LOL

QUOTE: For a second he forgets - about the numbers, about the Machine, about the ones he couldn't save - and it's John that ends up pulling away.
Aww. Lovely


QUOTE: Finch blinks, more than a little shell-shocked by what has occurred, but for once it's a good kind of shock and not a devastating kind like he's grown accustomed to dealing with since he built the Machine, since he found John.
Yes. Very good capturing of Finch’s POV and character reaction.

MInor EDITS:

QUOTE: he's in still the process of pulling the tags off of
he's still in the process of pulling the tags off of

QUOTE: binoculars he though
thought

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