I like how this starts with Jason being worried about Spinelli and then escalates into an intense situation with Michael thrown into the mix. There is mounting tension which you build so very well by leaving out bits and pieces of the information as Michael and Spinelli fill Jason in on what happen and yet clearly leave some things out. Great cliffhanger as well.
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timeasmymeasure
Intense
Date: 2010-01-18 10:10 am (UTC)